Inspiration tapped from
Our mind as the source.
An ambrosia well, rich
With the nectar that
Builds our dreams.
That is the fountain
Of youth, of life.
And good, yet also evil.
Our dual-capacity
We only seek
When we look within.
Wow, I love the ambrosia metaphor. You've been playing with a specific set of themes that I feel like that particular image resonates with. On a side note, I'm not a big fan of capitalizing the first word of every line. I capitalize for punctuation. As much as I don't want to push my own style on you, I think your lines would read in a much different and interesting way if you experimented with it.
Wow, I love the ambrosia metaphor. You've been playing with a specific set of themes that I feel like that particular image resonates with.
ReplyDeleteOn a side note, I'm not a big fan of capitalizing the first word of every line. I capitalize for punctuation. As much as I don't want to push my own style on you, I think your lines would read in a much different and interesting way if you experimented with it.